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I just recently learned an astounding literary fact. One of the world's most famous poems, "Ozymandias," by Shelley, has a doppelganger. It is a similar poem, on the identical topic, making the same point. It was written by one of Shelley's friends, the unsung poet Horace Smith, at the same time Shelley wrote Ozymandias. Both were published in the same magazine. The two poems were essentially a friendly bet: Which man could do a better job with a prearranged literary task? Literary history has made its judgment; who is to say if it is right?
Here is "Ozymandias," by Shelley:
I met a traveller from an antique land Who said: Two vast and trunkless legs of stone Stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command Tell that its sculptor well those passions read Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things, The hand that mocked them and the heart that fed. And on the pedestal these words appear: "My name is Ozymandias, king of kings: Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!" Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare The lone and level sands stretch far away.
And here is “Ozymandias,” by Smith:
In Egypt's sandy silence, all alone, Stands a gigantic Leg, which far off throws The only shadow that the Desert knows: "I am great OZYMANDIAS," saith the stone, "The King of Kings; this mighty City shows "The wonders of my hand." The City's gone, Nought but the Leg remaining to disclose The site of this forgotten Babylon. We wonder, and some Hunter may express Wonder like ours, when thro' the wilderness Where London stood, holding the Wolf in chace, He meets some fragments huge, and stops to guess What powerful but unrecorded race Once dwelt in that annihilated place.
Which poem is better? |
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Grade each poem.
Shelley's: |
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What most clearly sets the better of these poems apart from the lesser? |
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